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Would death really be so bad?
Would you really screw up your life?
Betray those you love,
Just to stay alive?
What are you thinking of?
What pain you have, is while you're here,
Torture, love, fear.

Letting go.
Feeling guilty for the pain you inflicted.
But what no one knows.
What's on the other side?
What happens when your mortal body dies?
There are stories, there are beliefs.
How does that compare to what one feels or sees?

If you knew your exact time of death,
What would you do?
Sit around acting like you're already dead,
Make it all about you?
Would you waste your life away?
Or would you jump into the fray,
And make life all it can be.
Take all the chances you can take.
'Cause death will make you free.
Let it all go- for goodness sake.

Death aint so bad.
It's all fear and pain from life.
Wanting what every one else has had.
It's for what we always strive.
The only reasons to be alive...
©2004-2010 ~Nymphas
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Author's Comments

I dunno, there is just soo much to do with this topic. I HAD to write about it, you know?

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:iconawkwardlovely:
suicide? wasting time? reminds me of a movie.

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"Never giving a care if we have no money, never sad in our hearts."- from women of the pleasure quarters (Geisha)
:iconnymphas:
I didn't say anything about suicide. This is about why people want to stay alive. How much sh** they would do to just live a few more days.

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Everyone remembers Adam and Eve, but who remembers Lilith?

Obey the CowGOD!!! *thanks*

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:iconmurphydc8:
cool piece. thought provoking. but don't be afraid to say shit. if that's what you mean, say it. directness is key to writing. also, this is a nice place where you don't have to censor yourself. :)
:iconnymphas:
I dont think that the word would be afraid.. I just.. I do that out of habit you know? And thanx for the comment.

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:euphoria:

Everyone remembers Adam and Eve, but who remembers Lilith?

Obey the CowGOD!!! *thanks*

Nymphas is a part of this club: [link]
:iconmurphydc8:
np on the comment part. i just believe in saying what you mean and meaning what you say and i know that if i decide to speak in a more "polite" manner than my thoughts formulate, i don't censor myself midword. i dunno, maybe this is me dealing with myself rather than you. i was just trying to offer a bit of support for honest thought.
:iconnymphas:
... umm yeah, I dont know really what to respond to that, except maybe that if you didn't do it mid-word, then they would get it mixed up with the other ones, {the four lettered ones anyways.} but yeah...

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:euphoria:

Everyone remembers Adam and Eve, but who remembers Lilith?

Obey the CowGOD!!! *thanks*

Nymphas is a part of this club: [link]
:iconmurphydc8:
perhaps a misunderstanding occurred somewhere in my response. when i was referring to the type of verbal control i excise in order to come across as more polite than blunt, i didn't mean putting **** instead of any choice word that would fit. i instead meant phrasing my sentence, clause, fragment, etc. in such a manner that no obscenity would even be assumed. for example, instead of my saying that i had a shitty day, i would say that my day was less than wonderful. i'm not trying to preach, just attempting to explain myself.
:iconaspiredmusicians:
i love it... i will favor it for our club cuz we need to get our stats up to a high level

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:iconnymphas:
Thanks. Is good to help, ne?

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:euphoria:

Everyone remembers Adam and Eve, but who remembers Lilith?

Obey the CowGOD!!! *thanks*

Nymphas is a part of this club: [link]

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